Love, Dies Not!
By threeleafshamrock
Sun, 15 Mar 2009
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A pair of eyes;
Twin emeralds,
Jewels of a gentle soul!
A pair of tears;
Mini prisms,
Making light of my heart!
A pair of kisses;
Brushing my lips,
As soft as a summer zephyr!
A pair of hearts,
Beating in tandem;
Living for each other!
A pair of hands;
Rough and worn
From the labour of love!
A pair of rings,
Symbols of life;
Endless circles of devotion!
A pair of farewells,
Softly whispered;
Until we meet again
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Pity it's not Valentine's
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Pity it's not Valentine's Day ... But then, I guess, who needs it? Not when you can write something as beautiful as this on a mundane Sunday:-) Thanks for brightening mine up, Chris.
Tina X
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Straightforward and powerful
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Straightforward and powerful :-) atb L
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What a wonderfully romantic
What a wonderfully romantic piece this is, Chris. It shows you're a big softie, just like me :)
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so lovely - i think the
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
so lovely - i think the tone of the last verse is enough tender fairwell that you could lose the exclamation marks and still feel the longing there - sweet love poem Chris, ld
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