Loves’ Descent
By threeleafshamrock
Thu, 02 Apr 2009
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How could love,
in its lofty penthouse,
descend past the middle floors
of dislike
and into the basement of hate;
as a stone heart,
toppled from its
unprotected balcony;
Lying there shattered!
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Oooo I like this one Chris!
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Oooo I like this one Chris! Brilliant imagery and well said ;)
Magic xxx
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I agree wholeheartedly with
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I agree wholeheartedly with Magic, Chris. 'Basement of hate'... I like that.
Tina xx
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I agree with the two lovely
I agree with the two lovely ladies above, Chris. This one is particularly satisfying.
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