An old battered suitcase
By threeleafshamrock
Sat, 28 Mar 2009
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An old battered suitcase;
small, brown; corners softened,
clips rusted.
A leather belt; same colour
same condition! Buckled
around it.
I remember watching him
as he walked away,
looking back.
One hand waving as leaves fell.
The other holding the case;
Mum crying!
He would return for Christmas;
presents from England,
in brown paper!
He worked across the sea,
he told me; another country;
a builder!
Life was his only educator,
a life of hard work, his lessons;
well learned!
Some called him an Irish Navvy
but I only ever knew him
as Dad.
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Ah, the last stanza is
Ah, the last stanza is fabulous and ties it all together like
"A leather belt; same colour
same condition! Buckled
around it."
Beautiful work, mate. Thanks :)
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A little gem, this one,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A little gem, this one, Chris. It really tugged at my heart strings. Brilliantly poignant.
Tina xx
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