Over!

By threeleafshamrock

Thu, 23 Sep 2010

1493 reads

6 comments

Staccato words, carried
on winds of change,
hammer rusting Armour -
some breaching;
Love, Dead, Regret, Over!
Mortally wounding an
already bleeding heart.

Comments

A very sharp poem, perfectly

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Thu, 2010-09-23 19:44

A very sharp poem, perfectly describing the feeling that follows those final words, it´s over.

Ouch! This stabs... well

Permalink Submitted by russiandoll on Fri, 2010-09-24 10:58

Ouch! This stabs... well done.

Thanks Maggy for taking the

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Fri, 2010-09-24 11:02

Thanks Maggy for taking the time to read and comment Chris XX

Thanks Russiandoll, the

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Fri, 2010-09-24 11:03

Thanks Russiandoll, the barbs can be wicked ;) Chris XX

'staccato words' - lovely

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Fri, 2010-09-24 18:59

'staccato words' - lovely image, Chris. Superb little poem ;) Magic xxx

Thanks Magic for reading and

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Fri, 2010-09-24 19:21

Thanks Magic for reading and your comments... Chris XXXX