Thoughts of Old Lovers
By threeleafshamrock
Tue, 22 Sep 2009
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I laugh, it laps, I linger
By the lake
Memories wash over me
And I take
Sustenance from cool waters
For the sake
Of lovers long lost and past
In the wake
Of torrid, youthful ventures
That still snake
In between the crevices
And so shake
The foundations of the mind
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'That still snake In between
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'That still snake
In between the crevices
And so shake
The foundations of the mind'
- love the final few lines, Chris! Well done ;)
Magic xxx
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New threeleafshamble love
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New threeleafshamble
love lines:same as Mistakenmagic.
Youthful ventures
That still snake
in between the crevices
and so shake the foundations
of the mind?
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i really like this one,
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
i really like this one, 3leaf. it's emotive and rhythmic...you know, for someone with "oldtimers".
jason
jason
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Very nice, Chris. Short and
Permalink Submitted by littlebit59 on
Very nice, Chris. Short and bittersweet hits the spot with me, too.
jeanne
Jeanne
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