When (For Haiti)
By threeleafshamrock
Mon, 25 Jan 2010
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When your world stops and all comes tumbling down,
When God has turned his back - or so it seems,
When all is darkness and hope can't be found,
When living nightmares, take the place of dreams,
When all seems hopeless; you alone and lost,
When fear's your one and only spiteful friend,
When the price of holding on 's not worth the cost,
When you start wishing that it all would end;
Wait! Wait for me...I am coming...
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Love the repetition, Chris -
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Love the repetition, Chris - very rhythmical! And of course, a wonderful, beautiful sentiment!
Magic xxx
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we can't even begin to
we can't even begin to imagine can we, your poem could apply to so many situations, but with Haiti so much in focus it highlights the work of the rescuers so well, just as well they never give up hope,
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A great sense of hope in
A great sense of hope in adversity - I really like this Chris
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