awake

By tibi popovici

Wed, 23 Sep 2015
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as in any dream,
you will find it real,
straight,
no wrong shapes,
long enough,
to despair,
clear roads,
murky waters,
sunshine,
love,
depression,
all this, now,
in different order,
until it stops,
you are awake!

 

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Submitted by loquaciousicity on

A funny observation!!

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Ooohh thanks so much Terry :)

T.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

even in sleep, we can deal with the negatives! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Yes, Rhiannon, sleep can hold on a lot thinks :)

Thanks so much!

T.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Tibi...this is fantasticsmiley  Tina

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

If it's coming from you, I better truly believe it :)

Thanks a lot!

T.