green morning

By tibi popovici

Wed, 09 Dec 2015

6 comments

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this morning I ate broccoli,
from the first bite
I got that taste
of green color

I never felt that before,
do you?
it's like mint,
I think,
but not so strong,
it's relaxing
and friendly

something like having spring
out for a picnic
hidden by a waterfall
sharing cranberries
grain by grain

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Wed, 2015-12-09 13:24

You enjoy your tastes and bring them to life! Good to be made to think about tastes. Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on Thu, 2015-12-10 08:06

Yes, tastes are very important, probably linked with our imagination :)

Thanks Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by cassiegoeswild on Wed, 2015-12-09 13:51

This is so cute and so lovely. I feel like its a story told by a little fairy or something. Such unusual descriptions.

Cass

Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on Thu, 2015-12-10 08:08

Oh, thank you cassie, glad you feel it that way.

btw, hope unusual it's in a good thing :)

Permalink Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on Wed, 2015-12-09 19:43

Oh how sweet. This is such an adorable poem. I'm going to read it to my daughter - she'll love it!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on Thu, 2015-12-10 08:10

Thats so nice from your side. Please let me know what you daughter think about it. :)