the lie

By tibi popovici

Sat, 14 Mar 2015
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6 comments
 

 

Lights on. There are no ponies in the woods, grandpa!

 

 

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

Short and sweet. Is this haiku, tibi?

Parson Thru

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks, Parson! Yes, could be called like that smiley But my intention was for a very short story. One short phrase which should answer at least 10 questions. First I design the questions, around 500 words, then I extract a convergence point. A bit complicated, but it's fun smiley

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Conjures up pictures between the words.

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Interesting description, Philip smiley Thanks for reading!

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Loved this, tibi, and could identify with it, although in my case it was a German Shepherd (dog, I hasten to add) on my bedsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

smiley Oh, Tina, I'm imagining it now and makes me laugh. So glad it wakes funny memories.

Thanks, Tina!