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By tibi popovici

Tue, 10 Mar 2015
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sunlight, in your eyes, reflects a demon, from the future

 

 

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Submitted by Bee on

I saw it as a poem - like this -

 

'Sunlight in your eyes

reflcts a demon

from the future'

 

i like it and found it thought provoking in its potential meaning. Picture goes with it really well, too.

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

yes, definitely can go like a poem, but my intention was to write a very short story and I hope can provide that feeling for others too smiley

Thanks for suggestion, Bee!

Submitted by Bee on

It wasn't a suggestion, really - just how I saw it. I like very small poems, but I like the idea of a short story, too.   Might need to work on the plot wink

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Ups, sorry, it was a misunderstanding from my sidelaugh Like the way you see it, because I also oscillated between story or poem.

Thanks!

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Regarding the plot, she's not the demon, me neither, the demon is the infinity mirror complex, that reflexion in reflexion, between our eyes, which for me seems to have the roots somewhere in the future smiley

Still not sure if it has enough plot for a story.

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Great image, full of complexity.

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks a lot for reading it, Philip!