"wake up" -haiku

By T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova

Thu, 21 Jul 2022
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the gibbous moon cries
wake up you lazy planet
we have work to do!

©'t. imaan tretchicovmanicova 
21jul22

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Submitted by catherine poarch on

I've now found out what gibbous means, thank you. A very direct few words, I like it. 

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

A nice one, tretchicovmanicova

Regards, Luigi

 

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Wow, thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback to my little writing.