The Look In her Eyes (IP)

By well-wisher

Wed, 01 Dec 2010
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I saw a woman with a broken heart
and the tears rolling down her cheeks.
I asked her “Woman, what is wrong with you?”
but she couldn’t move her mouth to speak.

Yet the look in her eyes said everything;
it said everything about love;
about the sorrow and the heartache
like the sky falling down from above.

I saw a woman with a happy smile
and she was dancing all around.
I asked her "Woman, is your love worthwhile?”
but she did not make a sound.

Yet the look in her eyes said everything;
it said everything about love;
about the majesty and the beauty
like the stars shining bright up above.

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Comments

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thank you, SundaysChild

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Well-wisher I too enjoyed this poem,and for the IP. And the look in her eyes can and will explain everything,true. julie x

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thanks, Cavalcaderl, glad you liked it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Well-wisher Hi! would you like me to chnage mine to the title of "Ole Blue Eyes!" I could maybe more appropiate, didn't want you to think I copied your's maybe so quick. But happens a lot someones title is the same, notice.I don't mind.Bound to be,with so many on here. julie x

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thank you for your concern,julie but I didn't think you'd copied me. I just took my title from the IP (and assumed that you'd done the same) so I couldn't really claim any ownership of it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new well-wisher Hi! Thanks hurry get to carol event, lost my glasses I see with found now so put me behind. No but it happens all the time. Repeats come up,and horses titles the same,strange. all the best, can't be helped. Glasses on top curtain on the washing machine,that's a new place for me. Take care.ok. Julie x