A taster of Bennett Donohoe
By The Writer
Sat, 17 Mar 2012
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Their was a gun shot, it narrowly missed.
It ran across the sun shinning, glistening, beach and eventually dropped to the sandy land.
Another gun shot, it fell deep into the depths of hell.
Blood dripped into the yellow sand
Before you knew it;the whole area (a meter in length) filled with rich red blood coated sand....
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A vivid piece of writing. I
Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on
A vivid piece of writing.
I suggest, though, that you get someone to check your spelling and grammar. For instance, the plural of "story" is "stories."
Keep writing.
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