I Cant Write Poems

By Yazmin

Wed, 18 Feb 2009
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To be completely honest
I dont know what to say
Shall I talk about Miss Double
Or what the teachers REALLY say.

C'mon lets be honest
You've thought about it before
I think everybody wonders
What they say behind that door.

Or shall I talk about gabby?
And who shes liking now,
I promised not to tell but
She wont anyhow so...

And should I mention Jodie
And what she said about sir?
Id have to watch my language though
I see year sevens out there!

So as ive demonstrated
My rhyming has no cause
Although im pretty shocked now
I just got loud applause!

Certificate U
My True Self, No Lies
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Comments

Submitted by chuck on
I agree with FTSE. A few things need tweaking. Of course a lot will depend on who the judges are but I say enter it anyway. What the heck.

Submitted by chuck on
Actually Yazmin you show a level of introspection and self-knowledge unusual in one of your years. And no Angst either which is refreshing. I may reconsider these comments if you post more than 3 pieces in one day.