Half In, Half Out
By yrene
Sat, 10 Jan 2009
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2 comments
Half in
Half out
Love lost
Iridescent in darkness
Yet not found in the light
Half brimming
Half void
Barely present
Desperately moves up
Only to fall down
Half silent
Half screaming
Loud whispers echo
A serenade of promises
Yet vows break in silence
Half bound
Half free
Prisoned in a land of freedom
Sheltered behind shadows
While parading under the sun
Half right
Half wrong
Stubborn to change
The mind understands
While the heart does not
Half kept
Half shown
Love never hidden
The outline glows
Yet yearns to be found
Love lost
Half in
Half out.
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Originally done, succinct
Originally done, succinct yet saying much. Good write. Val x
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Love this, thoughtful and
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Love this, thoughtful and provoking, well done.
Chris
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