PrimeMorgikk1029
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Story | The Knee | monodemo | 1 | 8 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Ribbons | PrimeMorgikk1029 | 0 | 2 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Killing Time | PrimeMorgikk1029 | 0 | 2 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Lion Tamer | randy-johnson | 1 | 2 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Fairy Who Chases Rainbows | mcscraic | 4 | 4 years 1 week ago |
| Story | desert rain | Nolan | 8 | 4 years 1 week ago |
| Story | A Sea of Tears and Flame | PrimeMorgikk1029 | 5 | 4 years 3 months ago |
This is a really moving piece
Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2024
This is a really moving piece. However, in my opinion, the rhyme scheme seems a little forced in places, and some of the lines remind me of Yoda-speak. They could possibly do with rewording to help it flow better. But your poem's still great, and...
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The sentence fragments create
Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021
The sentence fragments create a powerful sense of hopelessness.
This is great!
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