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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Collection | A Requiem For One Man's Life | marandina | 0 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Our Christmas Animal House | marandina | 0 | 11 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Private Heaven | marandina | 0 | 11 years 6 months ago |
| Forum topic | crop circles juliet oc | josiedog | 4 | 18 years 10 months ago |
| Forum topic | At the going down of the sun. | QueenElf | 3 | 18 years 11 months ago |
| Forum topic | Down And Out In The Jobcentre by QueenElf | tara_hanks | 11 | 18 years 11 months ago |
| Forum topic | Chinese Whispers by marandina | tcook | 4 | 18 years 11 months ago |
Will Benson be eliminated? He
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Will Benson be eliminated? He knows too much. You do dialogue really well. Keep going!
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 33
Dark, political machinations
Posted on Fri, 09 Jul 2021
Dark, political machinations and those poisoning incidents must have been scary. Major fallout from the firing on Canton. A busy and enthralling diary entry.
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 31
Big story shift coming for
Posted on Thu, 08 Jul 2021
Big story shift coming for Floyd Benson. Still following..
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 30
"..sentient awareness so
Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021
"..sentient awareness so important.." Beautiful thoughts triggered by a wonderful bird :)
Read full commentPosted in Daydreamer
Brutal scenes and some good
Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021
Brutal scenes and some good action writing going on. Still following..
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 28
Pure genius lol. That's the
Posted on Fri, 02 Jul 2021
Pure genius lol. That's the best Northern Manilow accent I have ever heard. Is this dedicated to your woofer, Lola?
Read full commentPosted in Builder's Plaster
"...only dead now really
Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021
"...only dead now really understand." I was right there with you, Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Timeless Wonder
A Chilling insight into a
Posted on Tue, 29 Jun 2021
A Chilling insight into a character with fatal flaws. Nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 27
A bubbling cauldron of a poem
Posted on Sat, 26 Jun 2021
A bubbling cauldron of a poem. Sounds like it was quite a site/sight. Super read. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Timanfaya Volcanic National Park
The last paragraph is ominous
Posted on Thu, 24 Jun 2021
The last paragraph is ominous and a clear signpost. It doesn't look out of place. I guess you need to decide where you pick up now having made it clear about what comes next. Do you jump close to the events you have signalled or take a slower run...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 26
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