I walked through the maze of streets and alleyways, trying to remember how to reach the town square. Seagulls circled above me, swooping low over my head and crying out like I was a scrap of food to be snaffled in their beaks.
Paul pawed at me and whimpered. I guessed he wanted a walk and was hungry. I fed him the custard creams left by housekeeping on the tray on the table with the teas and coffees.
Enjoyed this, Jane. Was chatting about Brum to my partner the other day. I used to have to go there quite a bit for work and never felt a love for the place, but she thinks it's great. Interesting to read your take on it.
Totally agree. Think you should definitely submit your stuff Jane if you haven't already. It's fabulous and deserves to be enjoyed by a wider audience. You're a brilliant writer.
I was thinking about this on my run this morning. Will read it over and message later. I don't think it needs much, just an extra piece of structure / link but obviously the challenge is it needs to be subtle. I like these types of writing...
Lovely piece of storytelling
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Lovely piece of storytelling and character building. Will keep an eye out for more.
Couple of spots -- mugs are ceramic, no? (Not glass)
Progidy -- Prodigy?
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Congrats on the PoD. Such a
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Congrats on the PoD. Such a disgrace. Thatcher's insane children.
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Enjoyed this, Turlough. Loved
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Enjoyed this, Turlough. Loved the idea him coveting his neightbour's wife.
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Enjoyed this, Jane. Was
Posted on Thu, 07 Dec 2023
Enjoyed this, Jane. Was chatting about Brum to my partner the other day. I used to have to go there quite a bit for work and never felt a love for the place, but she thinks it's great. Interesting to read your take on it.
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Totally agree. Think you
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
Totally agree. Think you should definitely submit your stuff Jane if you haven't already. It's fabulous and deserves to be enjoyed by a wider audience. You're a brilliant writer.
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More great writing, Jane.
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
More great writing, Jane. Congratulations -- this is our Pick of the Day. Please do share and like on social.
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A skilful reflection on
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A skilful reflection on disturbing times.This is our Pick of the Day -- please do share on Social.
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Enjoyed this, Rhiannon. I've
Posted on Tue, 03 Oct 2023
Enjoyed this, Rhiannon. I've managed to keep two flower boxes alive this summer, which is a personal achievement in my world.
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Congrats -- this is our Pick
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Congrats -- this is our Pick of the Day.
Please do share on social.
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I was thinking about this on
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I was thinking about this on my run this morning. Will read it over and message later. I don't think it needs much, just an extra piece of structure / link but obviously the challenge is it needs to be subtle. I like these types of writing...
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