Pyser walked along a beach at dawn. He heard the cries of an injured seagull. It was entangled in strips of plastic. The seabird’s left wing seemed broken.
The swan that Anne kept in the spare room was her ex-boyfriend, Marcus. When Darren had the flat to himself, he liked to sit in the room, which had a paddling pool, and chat to her ex.
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This is even better on the
Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023
This is even better on the second reading. What a belter of a short story this is. The way you build it up, take it down, and then build it up again is top drawer.
I've never heard of this story before. The detail about hastening the end is especially grim as I guess it was known by people that the condemned were often still alive after the drop. Very evocative and deftly put together -- the coffin as a...
I don't have much forgiveness in me I'm afraid. I feel like those politicians have had every opportunity to educate themselves and they've chosen greed, ignorance and bigotry. Telling people with buggar all to upskill themselves is so offensive...
This is even better on the
Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023
This is even better on the second reading. What a belter of a short story this is. The way you build it up, take it down, and then build it up again is top drawer.
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Enjoyed reading this,
Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023
Enjoyed reading this, Marandina. You capture the ruggardness of the landscape, rich with myth and legend.
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Congrats -- this excellent
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
Congrats -- this excellent piece, which has real rhythm and pace to it, is our Pick of the Day -- Please do share on Facebook, Twitter et al.
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I've never heard of this
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
I've never heard of this story before. The detail about hastening the end is especially grim as I guess it was known by people that the condemned were often still alive after the drop. Very evocative and deftly put together -- the coffin as a...
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Dust to dust.... I liked the
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
Dust to dust.... I liked the melancholic, wistful feel of this and the strong imagery. Nicely done.
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Congratulations -- This is
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
Congratulations -- This is our Pick of the Day. Please do read part II and don't forget to share on Facebook and Twitter
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Very poinant and enjoyable.
Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023
Very poignant and enjoyable. Thanks for posting.
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Haha! Alas, no trace of The
Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023
Haha! Alas, no trace of The Smiths. Meat is Murder has always been my fave album.
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I don't have much forgiveness
Posted on Tue, 28 Feb 2023
I don't have much forgiveness in me I'm afraid. I feel like those politicians have had every opportunity to educate themselves and they've chosen greed, ignorance and bigotry. Telling people with buggar all to upskill themselves is so offensive...
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Cpngrats -- this is our Pick
Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023
Cpngrats -- this is our Pick of the Day -- please do share on Facebook, Twitter et al.
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