“What’s with the limp, Mr. Danger?” Craven stopped at Betty’s desk and yelped into his closed fist. “That rotten McDougall kid kicked me in the shin...
He fanned the flames and muddied the waters now we’re knee-deep in a fiery swamp Blood and soil passion has crippled all reason They can't think with...
Loved the opening line, Shawn. It's true. I've also heard it gets stronger when it mends. Heard that in a Tom Waits tune. Not everyone sees the wounds behind the smile. I like that you do. Enjoyed this read., Shawan. Thanks.
Hi, Elsie. Would you mind if I recorded this? I really liked what you've done with the lyrics. Always looking for something good to sing. And Hobo's Lullaby is a song I like to sing. Let me know.
Simple don't come easy. I
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2015
Simple don't come easy. I love it, as well.
Rich
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Loved the opening line, Shawn
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2015
Loved the opening line, Shawn. It's true. I've also heard it gets stronger when it mends. Heard that in a Tom Waits tune. Not everyone sees the wounds behind the smile. I like that you do. Enjoyed this read., Shawan. Thanks.
Rich
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Hi, Elsie. Would you mind if
Posted on Tue, 29 Jul 2014
Hi, Elsie. Would you mind if I recorded this? I really liked what you've done with the lyrics. Always looking for something good to sing. And Hobo's Lullaby is a song I like to sing. Let me know.
Rich x
Read full commentPosted in Western -This machine kills fascists
This could not have been easy
Posted on Mon, 04 Aug 2014
This could not have been easy to write. Well done. Congrats on the pick of the day.
Rich
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Made me laugh, Tre or. Good
Posted on Sun, 13 Jul 2014
Made me laugh, Tre or. Good one.
spotted a couple of typos.
almost defining(deafening?)the quiet man
Read full comment"Oh you bet I do, (")
Rich
Posted in The Magnificent Fighting Pen
I'll never look at another
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014
I'll never look at another cup of coffee in quite the same way. But I know how you feel and I liked this very much.
Rich
Read full commentPosted in Coffee (LOVE)
Looking forward to a second
Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014
Looking forward to a second helping, Albert. I'd like to see where you take this.
Rich
Read full commentPosted in I ONLY HAVE EYES FOR YOU - Part 1
Magic rainbursts, I like that
Posted on Mon, 03 Mar 2014
Magic rainbursts, I like that Elise. A mad race of words. I loved each and every one.
Rich
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It was a fun post, Ace. Rich
Posted on Sun, 16 Feb 2014
It was a fun post, Ace.
Rich
Read full commentPosted in See A Psychiatrist
Great follow-up, Alex. Got to
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
Great follow-up, Alex. Got to me emotionally. Glad there's mote to come.
Rich
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