I wonder if you really need the final stanza? What does it add? It does jerk the/this reader right out of the atmosphere you have so skilfully created. \\\\
Some may say it feels like Groundhog Day as one of these acerbic satires is POD again. Perhaps it is, but they are very funny, and goodness knows we need some laughter especially in the dark days.
Jack. Para Handy with teeth. I'd like to see more too. I appreciate It can be frustrating when you're shouting into the abyss with not even an echo for an answer.
In Russian, “Нет войне” is pronounced "nyet voinye": strictly speaking - and also even better - the "voinye" is the dative case of "voina" so it means "no to war"
I do like
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
things which seem to be about nothing, but aren't.
Worth the reading for
"anecdotes which develop arms and legs with the passage of time."
alone. Very meta too, something else in its favour,...
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"Top
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of the world,Ma!"
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Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
Atmospheric, beautiful and serious poetry. That's why it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
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Excellent
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
and serious poetry.
I wonder if 'god' should be capitalized? Or if you might insert 'any' before the lower-cased god?
Marvellous work.
Ewan
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I really enjoyed this.
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
It had nice rhythm and some good internal rhyme.
I wonder if you really need the final stanza? What does it add? It does jerk the/this reader right out of the atmosphere you have so skilfully created. \\\\
best
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Some may say it feels like Groundhog Day as one of these acerbic satires is POD again. Perhaps it is, but they are very funny, and goodness knows we need some laughter especially in the dark days.
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Outstanding.
Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022
I can see, hear, smell and taste it all.
Read full commentVery well done.
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Another authentic slice of life
Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022
Jack. Para Handy with teeth. I'd like to see more too. I appreciate It can be frustrating when you're shouting into the abyss with not even an echo for an answer.
Don't give up.
Ewan
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Um...
Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022
In Russian, “Нет войне” is pronounced "nyet voinye": strictly speaking - and also even better - the "voinye" is the dative case of "voina" so it means "no to war"
не за что.
A very...
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