The poem The Children of Gaza does not exist. Instead, I saved time and energy by cutting out the middle person and writing my own letter of rejection.
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Jane - I enjoyed this poem,
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021
Jane - I enjoyed this poem, particularly the line 'Now we are detached/the energy is mine.' The ability to read or commune with nature seems to be key for the energy to shift. Enticing & intriguing! Very well done.
Wondrous images of evolving spring, Jenny - the dressing, blanketing, & Freya's mantling of the earth, all carried out with luminous care & attention. Very enjoyable!
Enjoyed reading about your trek rhiannon. I walked the Malverns a couple of weeks ago, from the Beacon to British camp. There's a small cafe at the base of British camp where, amongst other treats, you can buy rock cakes. It's one of life's...
Hello Di - Yes, I finished it, had a couple of rejections, but I'm hoping to publish it next year, either through an indie publisher or as a self publishing project.
Jane - I enjoyed this poem,
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021
Jane - I enjoyed this poem, particularly the line 'Now we are detached/the energy is mine.' The ability to read or commune with nature seems to be key for the energy to shift. Enticing & intriguing! Very well done.
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A difficult story very well
Posted on Thu, 22 Jun 2023
A difficult story very well told. All best wishes to you jean.
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Wondrous images of evolving
Posted on Tue, 21 Mar 2023
Wondrous images of evolving spring, Jenny - the dressing, blanketing, & Freya's mantling of the earth, all carried out with luminous care & attention. Very enjoyable!
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Best wishes to you Jean -
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
Best wishes to you Jean - hope everything goes well. And yes, I too laughed out loud at the male nurse!
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Thanks as always insert. And
Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023
Thanks as always insert. And yes, thumbs up for IP sideboard poetry!
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Enjoyed reading about your
Posted on Sat, 25 Feb 2023
Enjoyed reading about your trek rhiannon. I walked the Malverns a couple of weeks ago, from the Beacon to British camp. There's a small cafe at the base of British camp where, amongst other treats, you can buy rock cakes. It's one of life's...
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Thanks for reading & your
Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2023
Thanks for reading & your comment dougie. Plato's cave was the inspiration for this poem, along with a buddhist wheel! All best wishes to you.
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Hello Di - Yes, I finished it
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
Hello Di - Yes, I finished it, had a couple of rejections, but I'm hoping to publish it next year, either through an indie publisher or as a self publishing project.
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I loved the Martian
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
I loved the Martian footballer's kneecaps...and I really must make an apple & pear crumble soon...your delicious poem Di has made me hot for pears!
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Some lovely lines and ideas
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
Some lovely lines and ideas here Jenny - Sealed petals tenderly chaste...the idea of magnetic grace...and passions determined by the rain and sun.
(I may well have to steal quintessence - what a charming word!)
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