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204 of my comments have received 222 Great Feedback votes

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Smooth and, as far as I can

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2014

Smooth and as far as I can see flawlessly written.  Is this the start of something longer?  There are four characters already, discounting Hamzas' line manager and that suggests this is going to run.

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Posted in The Devil's Dish Served Six Different Ways (chapters 1 & 2)

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What was the cause of his

Posted on Sun, 07 Dec 2014

What was the cause of his egocentricity and anger?

 

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Posted in How to control temper

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Those truks are very very

Posted on Mon, 01 Dec 2014

Those trucks are very very spooky Andrew!  I loved this, would really love to read some of K's own thoughts.

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Posted in Green Trucks Carry Everything at Night

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Holy moley Tina.  Brilliant. 

Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2014

Holy moley Tina.  Brilliant.  Love the use of the seen text at the end.  Really very very good.  Bloody excellent in fact.

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Posted in Breaking Glass

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This is almost technically

Posted on Wed, 26 Nov 2014

This is almost technically flawless.  Really strong narrative that put me right in the place.  

Perhaps consider the action tag here:

"Of the friend of my childhood, my strong right arm.  See here.’   Alexander indicates the body...

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Posted in The Garden of The Gods

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I love this!

Posted on Sun, 16 Nov 2014

love this!

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Posted in 'the mad wind'

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A dull travelogue?  I don't

Posted on Fri, 10 Oct 2014

A dull travelogue?  I don't thinks so if it's written in the style of this, with grounded philosophy and acute juxtaposition of people, place and self.

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Posted in Reflection

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Another good one, even better

Posted on Fri, 10 Oct 2014

Another good one, even better than your first in my opinion.  Here are a couple of typos to sort out:

"She won't leave weather (whether) I".

"I've often though (thought) more people".

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Posted in Living on the Edge

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Well, I didn't see that

Posted on Fri, 10 Oct 2014

Well, I didn't see that coming!

Welcome to ABCtales.

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Posted in Blood on the Canvas

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I just want to say

Posted on Thu, 09 Oct 2014

I just want to say congratulations on your 800th cherry pick!  As far as I know that is an unprecedented achievement Tina.

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Posted in Albatross

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