Ghosts in the Machine (Poetry Monthly)
By Philip Sidney
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Time floats above as I go down the old roads
some look smarter, tarred against the dust and mud
of those oddly long ago days, yet
I can instantly conjure our young selves
tripping over rocks
telling stories of our future
longing to dart towards it like the fantail
with a flush, flashing its feathers
vanishing into the blue.
I’m a virtual vagrant wandering digital pathways
finding all the backways and blind alleys
of shabby towns off the highway
trying to defy the limit, sure
that what I am looking for
is up that grass path
around a hidden bend
if only I could get there.
Our ghosts are still there, on a dirt track
too far back to
stumble over like old friends
on a well-trodden way, we are
forever children, stranded in mire and time
shrieking our pleasure, our terror
knowing
we shall never be found.
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Trapped in photos of infancy
Trapped in photos of infancy and adolescence. Strangely enough, I'd welcome that. Beautifully conveyed journey to your past. The streets we know but changed. Beautifully done, one of my favourites of yours.
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love this one too. A virtual
love this one too. A virtual vagrant - perfect way of putting it!
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I loved this. I Posted a
I loved this. I Posted a story some time back called All the Ghosts of Us because I believe all our old selves are out there still, but I suppose they are memories. Your poem is perfect and very beautiful.
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Looking back at the looking
Looking back at the looking forward; refound roads and houses look so much smaller than the memories of them! But good to have the memories, and many turns of the road still to come. Rhiannon
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Is the recollection reliable,
Is the recollection reliable, is it real even? That it is there makes it real. I like this very much too.
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"A virtual vagrant wandering
"A virtual vagrant wandering digital pathways" - I think this sums up our society doesnt it. We used to be outside living life, now we are inside looking for it. Really great poem - I love the structure and the meandering flow.
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Nostalgia
Liked the extended metaphor of road and track.
"We are forever children stranded in mire and time"
was particularly well put.
Bravo.
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Hi Helen
Hi Helen
Lovely poem with special affects you are famous for.
Jean
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the way we were is the way we
the way we were is the way we are, we can use the metaphor of car to travel back on that road, but old ghosts use post-it notes.
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forever children my friend
forever children my friend that strand should never end. wonderful telling.
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Wonderful lines. Most of us
Wonderful lines. Most of us are mired, but you've escaped with this piece, leaving only a trace: Our ghosts are still there,
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Time envelops us... 'right
Time envelops us... 'right now', envisaging the future or reflecting on the past... we flow witht the flow...
super poem!
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This profound peom has great
This profound poem has great resonance for me. A fascinating discourse on the nature of memory and the ghosts of past, present and future!
I like the lines'telling stories of our future
longing to dart towards it like the fantail'
I think all writers are virtual vagrants. What freedom we enjoy!
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