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It's the year. . .
It’s the year 2117 and Orcas have taken over the world. They have become amphibious and adapted to walking on land with stout, tiny legs, although...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 19
It was slightly off-putting to hear Cece pacing around on the landing, going between her bedroom and the baby’s room. He tried to ignore her but for...
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Bizarrely he was back at The Driffold in what seemed like a fraction of the time it had taken on the outward journey to the paddock. He wiped the...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 17
Cece floated out of the room like an angry spirit. St John waited until she was halfway up the stairs before relaxing into a sigh then he went to the...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 16
St John Hughes He had become so used to the perennial pregnant pause in their relationship. It had started off that way, in the early years of their...
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Hi Di_Hard, thank you for
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
Hi Di_Hard, thank you for commenting. It's fascinating that orcas are more emotionally complex than humans, the human narcissist in me wonders how this is possible. Everything is getting so weird, I agree but perhaps it was ever thus. What I...
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Reminds me of the sky I saw
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
Reminds me of the sky I saw earlier, low rolling clouds, dark against the blue. I get the sense of something foreboding, it could be too late for a cure but we can only be optimistic. I really enjoyed the last verse, 'or maybe I'm a feathered...
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The word wicked, derived from
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
The word wicked, derived from Wiccan. I can't see anything too wicked here from June, except sacrificing a chicken, something KFC do on a gargantuan scale daily.
I enjoyed reading Paul because it's well-written, very unique and I wanted...
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Excellent descriptions of the
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Excellent descriptions of the tube, I can almost taste it. Looking forward to part two and what will become of June. Great Barr, I know it too well and Perry Barr too...
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We are like sponges,
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
We are like sponges, constantly soaking it all in. It always amazes me how much very young children learn in their first years but as you've said here, we never stop developing and learning from experience of the world around us and others.
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No-one get's double time
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
No-one gets double time anymore do they, more like half-time and make sure you get in done in half the time too.
This part of the story is creepy, please don't cut it short because creepy isn't easy to convey. There is something both...
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I don't want them to get
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I don't want them to get caught but what a burden this is to have a dead body to get rid of. I can see why Uggly Puggly is down, he's the only capable person, but capable of anything.
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This is very striking in its
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
This is very striking in its truth and somewhat depressing too. There is something really peculiar going on whereby we are constantly being informed about the destruction of the environment while being encouraged to partake in the overconsumption...
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I found this to be really
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I found this to be really quiet, soothing even. Those violets are truly sweet and you've honoured them beautifully here Jenny.
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I just read the three parts
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
I just read the three parts Paul and I I found this depressing tale to be quite believable in a Dr Who ish sort of way. I love the ending where you brought back the cob horses and it's written so well, I couldn't wait to read the next part. Not...
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