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I return from the newborn
Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015
I return from the newborn world and find you have written so much I don't know where to start. Picked this from list with closed eyes and so pleased I did. We are all shoes and we all run out of steam, some shoes I grieve for. Others I take to...
Read full commentPosted in Once, We Were Runners
Some chilling images and your
Posted on Fri, 23 Jan 2015
Some chilling images and your short tempo works well.Seems to change rhythm at "meet" - not sure if it is intentional. It is a really unusual metaphor for the sea, really like it.
Read full commentPosted in Full fathom five
This is stunning. For me it
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014
This is stunning. For me it works as a microscope looking on the past - it magnifies human frailty and the transitory state of life itself in all its agony whilst providing an acute lens on the vulnerability of our natural world too. You distil...
Read full commentPosted in Quarter to January
Lots of your work is very
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Lots of your work is very surreal and can have a sense of fragmentation or a momentary interrelational link between its characters. I think the polish on this is good - it's vivid with picturesque scenes you can pin down with your eyes because...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Sharp pull in the opening,
Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2014
Sharp pull in the opening, engages straight away Lindy.
Think it needs more of Ben's personality to come through, more quirks and history of why they've moved - is he popular at new school, is he a content child? Often lonely kids...
Read full commentPosted in The Tree House
Captured the complex emotions
Posted on Sat, 29 Nov 2014
Captured the complex emotions really well, Bee, the resentment and helplessness, the quiet waiting for any sort of end and noticing trivial details in the immediate environment until the noise finally ceases. Crucially, DV is frequently witnessed...
Read full commentPosted in Asleep
What if and what did's
Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2014
What if and what did's captured with a gutting sharp eye and tenderness.
Read full commentPosted in My Mother Myself
I really liked this. It has
Posted on Thu, 20 Nov 2014
I really liked this. It has an easy distinctive style with lots of detail and no overload. The back story is intriguing and the way you've incorporated history into it is imaginative.
Read full commentPosted in The Lady In Red: A Ghost Story
Hello Crumpet, I like this.
Posted on Sun, 16 Nov 2014
Hello Crumpet, I like this. Absorbing with a very entertaining narrative voice. That line where Hav hits with the mushroom knife feels it needs bulking out - such a significant event if he stops moving. Just a minor point but needs a little more...
Read full commentPosted in Himmel's Fantastical Non-Adventure
I like the tribe metaphor and
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014
I like the tribe metaphor and the use of 'the other' to convey the creature. That he/she impersonates animal calls but still doesn't get recognised feels key to his/her self-perception, there's an assumption that all the others are united but...
Read full commentPosted in Living on the edges
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