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317 of my comments have received 322 Great Feedback votes

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Can't stop laughing at chair

Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015

Can't stop laughing at chair under your arm. Adore the way you put words on the page. 

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I love this. It's candid,

Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015

I love this. It's candid, sharply written, self deprecating and  analytical. Welcome to ABC Tales and shout if you're not sure of anything.

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The cemetery is the strangest

Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015

The cemetery is the strangest place where celebrations take place amongst  tears and old relics and precious mementoes which fade even as we hold them. I always find the spinning windmills and gnomes absurdly comforting. Your format is in...

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Brilliantly composed.

Posted on Wed, 03 Jun 2015

Brilliantly composed. Inherently sad - immediate thought was how does society justify kids carrying the can for parents - very approachable poetry too. 

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What a gorgeously constructed

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

What a gorgeously constructed tribute and 'a lot alive.' Your metaphors for time and the peace of the scene are transporting.

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Posted in Quietus

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Adored this. Beautifully done

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

Adored this. Beautifully done. Can picture the process of how he/she got bones to plate artfully, the deft knife along lines of flight. I saw euthanasia in it. You've restrained emotion, made it procedural, which gives it so much more than you...

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'It' is conveyed in such a

Posted on Fri, 29 May 2015

'It' is conveyed in such a loathsome way. The words fall off the tongue, loaded with assonance and quickly barked bitter. Made me think of Voldemort. He shall not be. A poem to be heard in a room full of listeners. The flip over is deft, Bee, you...

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Posted in Exit Stage Left

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This brings out psychological

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2015

This brings out psychological torment in a very sharp, clear way. The mind and the relationship play off each other so that your reader feels twisted. 

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This is really good. A

Posted on Sat, 16 May 2015

This is really good. A mythically mad minefield of sex and drugs, nightmares and capitalist dreams. Something Chaucerian about it in a more explicit way. 

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You've nailed Sunday Night

Posted on Thu, 14 May 2015

You've nailed Sunday Night Syndrome and made it so much more final with death. Very well done. I thought Sundays were just full of fly-stamped joints and stained uniforms in my childhood.

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