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317 of my comments have received 322 Great Feedback votes

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Some lovely detail, here.

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Some lovely detail, here.

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Posted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 12: Ethel & Julius

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Hi Violet, like the period

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015

Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.

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Posted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 10: Murder Reaper

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This is fun.

Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015

This is fun.

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Posted in Eggyman

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Women are shafted either way

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...

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Posted in The death of beauty

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Delicately told through lush

Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015

Delicately told through lush imagery.

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Posted in To a Cherry Tree

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That house is very telling.

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015

That house is very telling. You can tell a whole history through 'things' and done with your usual finesse

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Posted in For Sale - Sold as Seen

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A very authentic piece that

Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015

A very authentic piece that captures the anxiety of so called friendships.

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Posted in Growing Up

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A traditional piece that

Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015

A traditional piece that makes the mouth water. Brought Rosetti's 'Goblin Market' to mind.

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Posted in Orbital (final)

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There's a touching simplicity

Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2015

There's a touching simplicity to your choice of words here. It brings impact and perpetuates the loss of normality sharply. 'Dapple-day' is lush.

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Posted in Only Cats Know When to Walk Away

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You forgot 'give him a bottle

Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015

You forgot 'give him a bottle of formula' when you have been breastfeeding every twenty minutes 24 hrs a day for five weeks. 'It won't kill him' No. But I will kill you, you ignorant link of shit. If another human tries to sabotage my commendable...

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