A little sun warms the bones, loosens an inner spring wound so tight it might snap. Something dormant wakes a memory of earth and air, green and song...
I trace words with a finger through the air across grey clouds, flat with disappointment, blown into puffy pillows with a kiss. Float, float far away...
This is so visual. The natural and the human world. The transitory nature of life with something immortal and timeless beneath. Lots of layers and things to think about here.
Strong images and ideas in this poem. Buses are such a place for witnessing the lives of others, what we see or choose not to see. Great first post! Look forward to more.
What an unusual story. Very
Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015
What an unusual story. Very imaginative.
Read full commentPosted in Conquest of Chimera
This is so visual. The
Posted on Thu, 28 May 2015
This is so visual. The natural and the human world. The transitory nature of life with something immortal and timeless beneath. Lots of layers and things to think about here.
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Path (4) Pen Dinas/Dinas Head
Full of energy and passion!
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2015
Full of energy and passion!
Read full commentPosted in Song of Providence
Beautiful, strange and sad.
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015
Beautiful, strange and sad.
Read full commentPosted in Mind Games
Strong images and ideas in
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015
Strong images and ideas in this poem. Buses are such a place for witnessing the lives of others, what we see or choose not to see. Great first post! Look forward to more.
Read full commentPosted in Eyes
She needs to lay off the
Posted on Sat, 23 May 2015
She needs to lay off the organic substance...
Read full commentPosted in Dear Friend From Afar- Pen Pal Letter
The devil sounds rather nice,
Posted on Wed, 20 May 2015
The devil sounds rather nice, I suppose that's how he lures people in, or maybe he's just misunderstood. Some interesting ideas and images here.
Read full commentPosted in Devil?
The fiction of being young
Posted on Wed, 20 May 2015
The fiction of being young and the reality, your experience is no less, it is yours and valuable.
Read full commentPosted in KIDS.
Vivid imagery, so much so I
Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015
Vivid imagery, so much so I saw this as anime.
Read full commentPosted in Scribbles From the End: Apocalypse Love
Some lovely description, I
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2015
Some lovely description, I enjoyed the puzzle of it!
Read full commentPosted in The Green man II
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