Goðafoss lies at the side of the road a lucky horsehoe left behind in the earth´s rush to change itself an easy walk for such a prize bluely iced, it...
The crust of the ground has not yet healed over, here the earth is still making itself, its surface hot and tender, Steam rises with the deep sigh of...
I love those fleeting glimpses of other lives from a train window, speed and stillness meet. The Degas pose is a lovely image, as is the winter jasmine wind wrap, an elderly ballerina in contrast to hard metallic lines, has a touch of Chagall...
Some great descriptions and
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
Some great descriptions and unusual ideas here.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 14 Conquest of Chimera
Clever structure, full of
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
Clever structure, full of cracking energy then gradually cools down.
Posted in ‘Blowing hot and cold’ (IP)
I can see the way this series
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
I can see the way this series will go...
Read full commentPosted in A Game of Cones
Hurrah! You're posting again
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Hurrah! You're posting again, another (glassy) gem.
Read full commentPosted in A Game of Stones
I love those fleeting
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
I love those fleeting glimpses of other lives from a train window, speed and stillness meet. The Degas pose is a lovely image, as is the winter jasmine wind wrap, an elderly ballerina in contrast to hard metallic lines, has a touch of Chagall...
Read full commentPosted in From a Stopping Train (Poetry Monthly)
A beautiful cartoon, strange
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
A beautiful cartoon, strange and dreamy.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Ten Conquest of Chimera
Great imagination. Lovely
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
Great imagination. Lovely dreamy feel.
Read full commentPosted in 'Til Death, Part 2: Heaven
Lovely ideas.
Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015
Lovely ideas.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Nine Conquest of Chimera
I'm enjoying this unusual
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
I'm enjoying this unusual story.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Five Conquest of Chimera
you have a great name! Poor
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
you have a great name! Poor Otis - cranberry martinis, I like the quirkiness of that. Interesting, I want to know what he's been up to.
Read full commentPosted in A City of Bad Souls
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