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grimms35
Jaz panting and out of breath runs uphill, the dark street a whetstone underfoot, and the unexpected urgency of the chase sobers him. It makes him...
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grimms34
Crossing Kilbowie Road Jaz negotiates the tooting horns of cars and buses with the absent-mindedness of a three-year-old toddler and seems startled...
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grimms33
Jaz is standing chittering at the bus stop outside Ramsay’s Fruit and Veg when a beige Morris Marina sweeps through the puddles, making an old guy...
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grimms32
Charlie the barman hovers around the five-foot mark and looks like King Louie from Junglebook , a comic figure, who knows everybody that is anybody,...
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grimms31
‘Shouldn’t you be going up the road, about now?’ says Jaz, smiling into his pint. ‘To get ready for your big date.’ Rab’s bottom lips droops and he...
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I guess we read things into
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020
I guess we read things into objects. Can't say I like Gordon.
Read full commentPosted in Gordon Ramsay, A Lesson In Life. Part One.
I guess we all worry that way
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2020
I guess we all worry that way and wolves come in many forms.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Footprint
a different generation, a
Posted on Fri, 07 Feb 2020
a different generation, a different life. In some ways a harder life.
Read full commentPosted in Burkette Greene
lost some narrative structure
Posted on Fri, 07 Feb 2020
lost some narrative structure here. Compelling as it is, turned into a rant. You can't hate your reader for not knowing. Not experiencing. Teach us in truth by telling a story that resonates in our hearts. The simple truth I understand is most-...
Read full commentPosted in Recognizing a Hero In Addict (7 cont&8)
this is great. I enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2020
this is great. I enjoyed reading it. I can see how so much training would make you incredibly fit, but, ironically, have such adverse affect on your bones. The killer line is it became drudgery. Just another way of making a buck. Amen to that. I...
Read full commentPosted in An Unexpected Change
yes, nothing to do with
Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020
yes, nothing to do with global warming - apparently!
Read full commentPosted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
happy sad. sad happy,
Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2019
happy sad. sad happy, sometimes we settle for the crappy.
Read full commentPosted in The Day Before Christmas
good story, but the changing
Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019
good story, but the changing point of view weakens it. I'd suggest make it his story or her story.
Read full commentPosted in Strings of Desire (A working title)
200 years doesn't sound like
Posted on Mon, 16 Dec 2019
200 years doesn't sound like rapid change, but I guess it's all a matter of perspective.
Read full commentPosted in Creative Media and Sales : Ch.16d The Decline of Civilisation
Lovely story and true too.
Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2019
Lovely story and true too.
Read full commentPosted in Author's Day
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