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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2173345 times and 1172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1567 of my 15,071 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1599 votes

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grimms30

Jaz catches Pizza Face a slap on the back of the head when he catches him and Tony smoking a roll-up at the bottom of the stairs. ‘Go up to Rab’s and...
Cherry

grimms29

After a while Tony and Angela get sick of hiding from a giant dinosaur under the bed and crawl out dusty and uneaten, which is just as well, because...
Cherry

grimms28

When Dermot answers the door, he’s not sure what to expect. ‘I’m Marie,’ she says, holding a soft hand out for him to shake. ‘And I’m a social worker...
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grimm27

The school nurse’s grey hair resembles an unkempt blackbird’s nest, with a pokey wee white hat stranded on it. She has squeezed into her white...
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grimms26

Jaz can’t find his house keys and hammers on the front door, flipping the letter box with an untimely rat-a-tat-tat, echoing through the close. Karen...

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1567 of my comments have received 1599 Great Feedback votes

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I'm a bit like you, I've

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I'm a bit like you, I've heard of J.K.Rowling. Haven't read any Harry Potter. But I have hear the myth around how she was working in an Edinburgh coffeeshop...being turned down 12 times is nothing. I've heard of Sheldon, watched a bit of The Big...

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Posted in Jim Parsons and J.K. Rowling.

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gritty and grimy, so he's a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

gritty and grimy, so he's a cop, interesting. terriific wring. whose story is it, Gallacher or Crowe's? If it's Crowe's the descripton of him given (change of point of view) by Gallacher needs a bit of work and kinda jams the narrative. 

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Posted in A Quality of inertia (WIP)

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Word origin of 'vade mecum'

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2019

Word origin of 'vade mecum'

C17: from Latin, literally: go with me

I will walk with you a while in your writing. Alan Bennet's idea  of reading as a hand held out which you grasp. Munch's scream is so popular because it allows for...

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Posted in Scream

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Amen. 

Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2019

Amen. 

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Posted in He Who is Sent

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a little grace is poetry that

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

a little grace is poetry that stretches the soul of even hungry ghosts. 

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Posted in Second thoughts

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yep, I read this. I like the

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

yep, I read this. I like the idea of all that fighting over a simulacra. But it was really virtue they were fighting over. Something they couldn't possess. I guess there's a bit of the idea of ideal forms thrown in as well. My answer is longer...

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Posted in trojan horse

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fireworks is big business,

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019

fireworks is big business, but a shrinking business. I guess councils will opt out of having displays. What a waste of money? 

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Posted in Pets And Fireworks.

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I guess we all select books

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

I guess we all select books that we think has value. Our values differ. As do our tastes. 

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Posted in Alien Opportunities Ch.1 : New Opportunities Part 3

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It was elves. Elves were

Posted on Fri, 18 Oct 2019

It was elves. Elves were cheaper than robots are now. So they employed them instead of humans. Watch your tense. You tend to move from present to pass tense and back again. |No biggy, but keep an eye on it. 

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Posted in Horn and Hardart Automat - (A day spent with my dad)

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I guess we're all armoured by

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019

I guess we're all armoured by indifference - unitl we're undone. 

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Posted in Consulting the Runes

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