celticman

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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2169647 times and 1171 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1566 of my 15,071 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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Love Story 16

We’d arranged to meet by the coal cellar, when it was dark. I’d already checked. The lights in Mrs Connolly’s house were out. Apart from the one in...
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Love Story 15

Ali came to my room after dinner. It was too cold to do anything. So we rolled about my bed, cuddling and kissing. She moaned a few times. Flashed...
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Love Story 14

Mum made us both a pot of tea and put out a plate of Digestive. We sat at the table, knee to knee. She had her fags. I’d my biscuits to dunk in my...
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Love Story 13

Da came through for his dinner. He glanced at us talking and laughing, grunted something, as he drowned the fish in salt and vinegar. Picked up his...
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Love Story 12

Mum had a cup of tea on the go and the chip pan on to make Da’s tea. Animal fat and incinerated starch creating a sticky vapour that clung to every...
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1566 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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ah, difficult and breathing

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

ah, difficult and breathing is always optional, paternity fade out. 

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Posted in A different way to measure time

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43 it is then. Or isn't.

Posted on Mon, 11 Nov 2024

43 it is then. Or isn't. There are no such things as facts now. Dead bodies don't exist. Women and children died of natural causes. They are just trying to find which bits fit together. 

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Posted in Letter of Rejection

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good to see you (I mean

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

good to see you (I mean Archibald) off the sauce and back to wriing about booze. 

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Posted in Who's That Girl? (Dead Reckoning series - Part 34)

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you are fire, the creator. 

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

you are fire, the creator. 

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Posted in Watching the Fire

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Ah Atlantic praise for this

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

Ah Atlantic praise for this mourning note to Scottishness or is it Norseness? 

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Posted in East Coast Scotland (Reflection)

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'feeling a little ridiculous'

Posted on Wed, 06 Nov 2024

'feeling a little ridiculous'. Fine for stories and narrative. But not for scripts? It's all show and tell. Feelings fall into that world of neither? 

BBC is now open for scripts of 30 pages or longer. 

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Posted in Meat Crimes - Scene 4

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I'm not sure it is surreal.

Posted on Wed, 06 Nov 2024

I'm not sure it is surreal. It feels very, very real. 

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Posted in Message : Post Scriptum

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we're all complicated. When

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

we're all complicated. When we make life simple, we start lying. 

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Posted in He Was

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State-sanctioned hate is the

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

State-sanctioned hate is the worst kind. Whether it is burning witches in the name of religion or setting up death camps to close the doors and murder those mouths that are unworthy of life. Trump is evil for the reason he is filled with hate and...

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Posted in I HATE YOU!

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I'm a great fan of  A Sudden

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024

I'm a great fan of  A Sudden Lavender, one of the best books I've never read.

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Posted in The Politician's Daughter

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