He Was

Cherry

By Ewan

Sun, 03 Nov 2024
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9 comments
 

He was:

smaller than life,

older than Springtime,

some the wiser,

found for words,

front for good,

scruffy as ninepence,

as timid as brass,

as hate as not.

He was ...

Complicated.

Certificate U
Poem
Not Quite Good Enough
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Penny4athought on

he sounds like a contradictory character- I enjoyed the flow of your definitions and how the final line defined them, smiley

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Submitted by celticman on

we're all complicated. When we make life simple, we start lying. 

 

Submitted by Turlough on

And she was... according to yer man Stipe.

Earworm of the day nicely embedded.

Turlough

Submitted by Ewan on

 You've now ear-wormed me!

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Submitted by Turlough on

But don't fret! There are much worse earworms than REM.

Try not to think about Snooker Loopy by Chas n Dave.

Turlough

Submitted by Ewan on

 Talking Heads from Little Creatures!

I'm playing it on the radiogram in the corner now, the only known cure for earworms.

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Submitted by Turlough on

You're right! How the memory fades these days.

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Submitted by Ewan on

  I joke, but since both parents died with Alzheimer's, I worry every time I forget anything.

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Submitted by Turlough on

It's a bit like that for me. When I worked for a living I spent a lot of my days in care homes so every time I couldn't find my keys or phone or something at home my kids would remark that I had caught Alzheimer's off one of my elderly people. They laughed but I didn't.

 

 

Turlough