celticman

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I have 1154 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2138162 times and 1168 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1560 of my 15,046 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1592 votes

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grimms6

Light shimmered and shed its hat of cloud and shadows. Snowfall drifted down setting the world to white. Our street was smaller and larger,...
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Grimms5

Most folk in a room and kitchen round about here envy us, because there is only me and Da. I guess even Pizza Face, if he ever thought about anything...
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Grimms4

Pizza Face ducked his head down when he took a drag on a fag and hid it behind his leg when he wasn’t smoking. He’d stolen a dout, almost a full...
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the three wise men + one

I was coming back from the Dropp Inn and I met the three wise men, standing in the lane outside The Tasty Spot , at the fence, broken glass at their...
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A gift at Christmas

Years ago, when Christmas was still Christmas and I was just a wee boy stuck in my room in the attic because of the asthma, and everything else that...
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1560 of my comments have received 1592 Great Feedback votes

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grief is a bell Harry (Kevin)

Posted on Sat, 17 Nov 2018

grief is a bell Harry (Kevin), and your story rings true. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (Blood)

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serenity, one of the few

Posted on Fri, 16 Nov 2018

serenity, one of the few things you can't buy. And great writing, well, you can buy that. I had the last meeting with my writing mentor Carl Mac Dougall today and he mentioned James Joyce and his story The Dead as being pretty much perfect., The...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (The Night Before)

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wonderful story telling. I'd

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

wonderful story telling. I'd add Tom (Cruise) surname, I had to think about it and lazy people like me don't like to come out of the flow of the story to do that. brilliant. 

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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yes, what happened in

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

yes, what happened in Sarajevo spread through the Slavic nations and engulfed us all. 

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Posted in Achilleio

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that's what I call desperate

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

that's what I call desperate and sad Jenny, but what do I know? good story Harry, I'm sure it's a metaphor for living. 

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Posted in Band of One

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a chapbook of wise sayiings,

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

a chapbook of wise sayiings, I foolishly enjoyed reading. keep writing. 

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Posted in Scattered Wounds: I should like to understand myself properly before it is too late

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embarrassment {another flush

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

embarrassment {another flush of embracement at this} so many parents have Alzheimer's I'm sure there's more than a few who'd happily choke them too. 

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Posted in A Weekend with Family

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maybe, but often they don't

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

maybe, but often they don't get it. 

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Posted in ORPHAN BOY

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we're all trying to get on to

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

we're all trying to get on to a better path. Keep writing. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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rainbows are majestic, but

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

rainbows are majestic, but you need to be looking up. You were and are. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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