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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2170993 times and 1171 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1566 of my 15,071 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

grimms16

Instead of going home, Jaz kept walking. Not far, a few closes along, on another day, a good summer’s day, he could lean out the window and give Rab...
Cherry

grimms15

‘Get up, ya lazy bastard!’ Jaz’s mum Senga shouts at her son. ‘It’s almost twelve, why don’t yeh go out and get a job like aw the rest of them? I...
Cherry

grimms14

Jaz didn’t like wearing a hat, even though it was raining hard, because he thought it made him bald. Not that anybody would laugh at him. They wouldn...

a wedding

and so to the big day queen of the may white dress and wed honeymoon bled a word of advice you’ll find a history of people of infamy when they say ay...
Cherry

grimms13

Traffic sloshes through the rain on Dumbarton Road. We pass a woman holding a brolly at forty-five degrees against the wind and to keep her permed...

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1566 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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appreciate all your help

Posted on Thu, 31 Jan 2019

appreciate all your help stephen. When (if) I come back to this story, the first place I'll look is other people's comments. as you know that's where fault lines lie. 

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Posted in Angel 14 (getting to first base)

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methinks no. hope not. 

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019

methinks no. hope not. 

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Posted in The Robin.

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the art of truthfulness I

Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019

the art of truthfulness I like that. Lots of layers of meaning. Adds strenght to the story. 

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (6)

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I think you/ve caught it jane

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

I think you/ve caught it jane, what I'm not sure, but I like it. 

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Posted in That's Not The Way I Go

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lovely story Harry. We have a

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)

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I saw this documetary ahd she

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...

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Posted in One Hundred Million Dollars.

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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you caught it, the joy of not

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done. 

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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