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I have 1177 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2459115 times and 1202 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1642 of my 15,474 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1672 votes

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Trigger

Homes built by spread sheets Sterling flows half-level to half level Splitsection soundaspace Stuck-up tower blocks. Designed by gods Jean or Jacques...
Cherry

thank-you notes

I wrote thank-you notes as a child. A thick HB3 pencil in my chubby mit. The pencil sharpener on the teacher’s desk, head height, was a big thing...
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Bernie the bolt.

I got a text message on the way back from Dalmuir Station. I checked my phone. Saw it was from Bernie. “Cm up & see me,” it read. His flat was...
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organist and monkey

The organ, off-kilter as a bagpipe chord, begins the first hymn. Major keys and minor key dance around the usual dirge. Funeral music. The...
Cherry

Don't talk back

I slept through the Russian missile crisis when John F Kennedy called the Russian’s bluff and sent them homeward to think again. It was a simpler...

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1642 of my comments have received 1672 Great Feedback votes

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She aimed a finger at my head

Posted on Wed, 08 Feb 2017

She aimed a finger at my head, and slowly moved it forward until it rested on the gateway of my cursed recession.  ' Descriptively, you know what you mean and I know what you mean after I read on, but maybe recession as a lead into baldness is...

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Posted in CC 108: Daniel

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cheers Elsie, I guess the

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

cheers Elsie, I guess the house is like many others in which the man is king, the wive loyal servant, told what to think and what to do. 

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Posted in grimms16

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juxtaposition of life and

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

juxtaposition of life and death, aye. Makes you think. 

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Posted in Waters

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sounds a wee bit like Harry

Posted on Sun, 01 Jan 2017

sounds a wee bit like Harry Kane and a mix of Alex Ferguson and Bill Shankley as the manager. 

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Posted in The Loanee - A Promising Future

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christmas and new year number

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

christmas and new year number one, well done. 

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Posted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?

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I've always wanted a tsunami

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016

I've always wanted a tsunami you could fold up in your pocket. 

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Posted in Her father was a thunderstorm

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bit about writing books,

Posted on Tue, 13 Dec 2016

bit about writing books, writing block, finding a publisher and utopism. I particularly liked this idea: 'Power and competition in politics and business greed were sidelined and made unfashionable.  Work was necessary but it was not to rule life...

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Posted in History Of The Creadds (Ch.13d)

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if you look through your

Posted on Tue, 29 Nov 2016

if you look through your fingers it seems very much like this world, but instead of space travel, simple air travel. that's a good thing to base the future on, being like the past, but with speedbumps. . 

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Posted in Is Space The Final Frontier? Who Will The Man Of The Future Be? (Ch.13c)

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I prefer the sun, but I guess

Posted on Sun, 27 Nov 2016

I prefer the sun, but I guess I'm not the only one. Without rain I fear makind would be history. 

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Posted in Rain third position

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30 story in 30 days, you're

Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2016

30 story in 30 days, you're having a fucking laugh! keep at it. 

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Posted in BIG JOHN.

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