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I have 1174 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2374753 times and 1197 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1623 of my 15,409 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1657 votes

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Love Letter

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Cherry

the big check up

Heart - the proper place to start Too snug to be riled Liver- there’s the boy Loved fatty food and all things crude Kidneys - pissed away Indelible...
Cherry

Countdown

Countdown When Helen got the telephone call that her Da was dead she was curled up on one end of the couch watching Countdown, painting her toenails...

Waiting

Fog clouds and claws Cling-things of the flesh Earth a smoking pit Mountains made to fit Unmanable things as sea Albino plants Fallen lies of the...

strides

Is it fun being impossibly young? Am I too old to care What you wear? What I wear Without a care? T-shirts, chains, all a dazzle. Soulboys’ greasy...

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1623 of my comments have received 1657 Great Feedback votes

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each bite of the pie and a

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016

each bite of the pie and a different lie. There's poetry in those woods. I'm sure they are misunderstood. A parable of a poem in which to our great shame, our masters those that own the pie, are vile enough to know that eating poor people is the...

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Posted in The Everlasting Pie

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I doubt I understand this,

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

I doubt I understand this, but I don't suppose that's such a bad thing. There's nothing malevolent about it. The woman in the black-and--white photograph is pretty. I'd guess from Sim's stories this is a family member. I'm not sure what one part...

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Posted in Doubt is my mistress

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sweet and not in a sugary way

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

sweet and not in a sugary way. 

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Posted in Buster

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Time indeed, has no hold. 

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

Time indeed, has no hold. 

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Posted in My dead diary – Sunday 7th February

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lovely - and wooly thoughts

Posted on Sun, 31 Jan 2016

lovely - and wooly thoughts about love and caring - I like that. 

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Posted in SEVENTEEN (after Oliver Comins)

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I get this, but I wasn't sure

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2016

I get this, but I wasn't sure if the pungent tramp was a) you walking through the metro soliloquizing or b) an actual smelly old man. 

I'd rephrase that bit. 

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Posted in Making the most of it

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unbalancing planes is quite a

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2016

unbalancing planes is quite a trick, but I guess I could get good with time. Liked this. 

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Posted in Beginners, Please...

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oh, date with new dentures.

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

oh, date with new dentures. the wolf equivalent of garlic. Nice little mix and minx of a story. 

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Posted in Rudy, Lil Red and DJ Gran [Red Riding Hood Retelling]

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beautiful and true -god knows

Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016

beautiful and true -god knows it's true and so do you. 

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Posted in Triptych 1: Mass

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the afforntery of that Clare,

Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2016

the afforntery of that Clare, watch out for the creak of the wardrobe and soon she'll no be there. I like this.

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Posted in The Wardrobe

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