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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2169905 times and 1171 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1566 of my 15,074 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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Cherry

how to be stupid

Reading is the engine of writing. Tune up. Breathe in the perfume of words and phrases. Become familiar with ignorance. Recognise it in yourself...
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Cherry
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dread-nought

Phrases orphaned and read cramming inside my head conversations of sounds drowning, clowning around silence of the heart dual rhythm apart...
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Cherry

standing in the queue to order a word kebab at my local takeaway

What would you like? Voice of division Voice of derision Vice setting tone Garnish with that? Waiting for a letter to arrive Swirly bluebottle battle...
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Cherry

huts 5 (rewrite)

The office is too warm. I sit squelched and sweating under the pall of Wullie the Poles’s Senoir Service , nose buried in files, eyes shifting...

doodles

Little bit thing lying in your sprawl Crying as if the world will end It might It might This very night But don’t you bite Settle on a secret There’s...

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1566 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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evernow is to be the person

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

evernow is to be the person we want to be. Lovely. 

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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family worries, how we scurry

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2015

family worries, how we scurry to and fro from that worry. 

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Posted in Cinderellas Have Stubble Too

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A stor[e]y below 

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

A stor[e]y below 

so the journey begins. Not sure why anyone would volunteer their child for sacrifice. The story of a lottery and sacrifice for the good of the land is more common.

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Posted in Dancing Silhouettes

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take a deep breath, powerful.

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2015

take a deep breath, powerful. 

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Posted in Deterioration Haiku

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we're all capitalists now

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

we're all capitalists now comrade. 

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Posted in an American thinks of Russia

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yes, I like it too. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015

yes, I like it too. 

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Posted in Orbital (fourth position)

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plot against the crows, often

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

plot against the crows, often difficult but a lasting image. 

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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writers'faces. I was very sad

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015

writers'faces. I was very sad to hear about Terence Oblongs death. We spent many a day on the mountain of Just Fucking Write and I must say he was an inspiration. I was a bit peeved however to find I'll be sharing the Valley of the Giant Stoats...

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Posted in The death of Terrence Oblong

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I like these tales of Emer's

Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015

I like these tales of Emer's Ireland and Archie Given going taking his life. 

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Posted in The Hill in the Pale

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I read it in one gulp, but it

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I read it in one gulp, but it went down smoothly. Lovely as a draught of a draught. 

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Posted in Christmas Game Over

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