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I have 1154 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2136948 times and 1168 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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In Closing

Years roll down your face – historic Hysterical Pack a paunch to your gut A hundred billion neurons die Now you know why Diet You what-the-fuck...
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Cherry
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10 Near Death Experiences (but there's only 5 NDEs because I'm still alive).

Ten near-death experiences. I don’t remember this NDE, but I’ve got reliable witnesses lined up to testify, although not on me, that it’s true. I was...
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Ambush

If you don’t get by Don’t ask why Maybe next year Shift your feet Move on Can’t you see? Work harder Become like me Cleanse the dust Sunny side up...
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fix you 3

Back at base, doors scanned and measured Inspector Allan’s approach and let him through. Office walls ebbed and flowed and doubled as free-floating...

toxic bubbles over Manchester

Heat febrile facts—folly blooms Gather the witch’s stool A fiend inspired Little potions, little notions, little imps Shrink chaos and sell the jar...

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1560 of my comments have received 1592 Great Feedback votes

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Reminded me a bit of Stephen

Posted on Tue, 01 Sep 2015

Reminded me a bit of Stephen King (Stand by Me and The Tommyknockers) it's certainly got that otherness that affects dreams and memory and turns a body. I don't think 'no one' needs a hypen. And I'm not sure about choosing 'initiates'. I love the...

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Posted in Relic

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thanks vera and littlebit. I

Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015

thanks vera and littlebit. I acutally forgot I wrote this. I guess that photo of the wee boy in the sand, like the one in MyLi, of a little girl burning in Vietnam, makes you think, just a splurge of sound, on paper, no real sense. What makes me...

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Posted in dread-nought

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I suppose getting it down on

Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015

I suppose getting it down on 'paper' might help? 

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Posted in Love Journal #1 Damage Control

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slight breeze and a hint of

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2015

slight breeze and a hint of danger in a leisurely lie. 

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Posted in Thoughts on a Rooftop

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thanks Rob, I'd guess I'm

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2015

thanks Rob, I'd guess I'm held in such esteem because I've been here longest. I must admit to writing as much rubbish as the next man (or woman), but I'd also guess I've lucked in that it's the first you've read and you like it so much....

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Posted in little Hiroshima in my head

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tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow,

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow, might never come, poor today, but rich in another way. 

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Posted in A Friend Named Big Bird

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that's the truth, truth,

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

that's the truth, truth, Nothing I can say, but the world doesn't have to be that way. 

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Posted in This is the world we live in:

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death is never far away. Not

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

death is never far away. Not us we pray. But for a moment we lie and watch the bird of prey fly by. Lovely. 

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Posted in Kite

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excellent, fast paced with

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

excellent, fast paced with characters that stand out and great ending. bound to be trouble. Ideal for the dealer. 

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Posted in Chapter Three

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eighteen, bursting with life,

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

eighteen, bursting with life, when you believe your a man but just a boy, chained to the grass, forever, or until forgotten. Sad. Funnily enough a guy reversed in a van today and shouted my brother's name. he thought I was him. He's dead, of...

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Posted in Out of This World

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