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snow lies outside waiting like a cat thick fluffy fur white gleaming flat bumper deep cars lurk stuck fast as burrs in streets shaken by sky ripping...
Forgetting things is so scary like standing on a bank a river is eating away at. My Dad died of dementia unable to talk. My son hates that I want to...
It is important to be able to look down on your enemy. Though they are not enemies rather bread and butter. That sort of spongy white pap I wouldn't...
Invisible fresh air is cut and sewn when whistles, chirps and warbles sweetly shear off from sky's roll of space, as silk ribon freed, catches light...
1861 of my comments have received 1913 Great Feedback votes
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loved your description of
Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2024
loved your description of getting home before the rain comes! I know just what you mean - away from houses you can see the edges of what's going to happen, gauge shape and direction, and in a way the sky becomes a being, as opposed to catching...
Loved this :0) Findus being named after a river in India is GENIUS, toad in the hole flavoured condoms, riding bikes because vegetarian, ribbed bathmats, it was so funny, BIG THANKYOU :0) And I love that you have a photo of Joan's tortoise!
yes, have wondered if very out of date magazines at the dentist is partly to save on anaesthetic later on! Maybe that could be your angle- mind numbing before getting on an aeroplane. Or maybe it could be useful reading for spies before a lie...
WONDERFUL :0) Did you know, my son is named after him? He doesn't (yet) appreciate the music, but I hope it will be like avocadoes and suddenly he will. At the moment he consoles himself that the name can also mean pleasant wood by a field......
I'd wondered if it was about him in your first part. So well written. It amazes me how very clever people sometimes cannot see the consequences of what they "achieve". I liked how you have Lucifer trying to smuggle himself into Heaven just as the...
My Dad, who grew ginormous carrots, said kindly, when my carrots were very small and weird shapes growing in the heavy clay here, that carrots like sandy soil, because it is easier for them? I sympathise very much with your poem and like Paul,...
loved your description of
Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2024
loved your description of getting home before the rain comes! I know just what you mean - away from houses you can see the edges of what's going to happen, gauge shape and direction, and in a way the sky becomes a being, as opposed to catching...
Read full commentPosted in Weather
Loved this :0) Findus being
Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024
Loved this :0) Findus being named after a river in India is GENIUS, toad in the hole flavoured condoms, riding bikes because vegetarian, ribbed bathmats, it was so funny, BIG THANKYOU :0) And I love that you have a photo of Joan's tortoise!
Read full commentPosted in The Spice of Life
yes, have wondered if very
Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2024
yes, have wondered if very out of date magazines at the dentist is partly to save on anaesthetic later on! Maybe that could be your angle- mind numbing before getting on an aeroplane. Or maybe it could be useful reading for spies before a lie...
Read full commentPosted in My Groundbreaking Article
WONDERFUL
Posted on Thu, 30 May 2024
WONDERFUL :0) Did you know, my son is named after him? He doesn't (yet) appreciate the music, but I hope it will be like avocadoes and suddenly he will. At the moment he consoles himself that the name can also mean pleasant wood by a field......
Read full commentPosted in Bill or Bob?
What a view! I do really
Posted on Tue, 28 May 2024
What a view! I do really enjoy your walking poems, thankyou so much for posting this one, and your wonderful photos
Read full commentPosted in On top of the world again!
You have filled my mind with
Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024
You have filled my mind with beautiful images and a feeling of peace
Read full commentPosted in Dusk
I'd wondered if it was about
Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024
I'd wondered if it was about him in your first part. So well written. It amazes me how very clever people sometimes cannot see the consequences of what they "achieve". I liked how you have Lucifer trying to smuggle himself into Heaven just as the...
Read full commentPosted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two)
Thankyou for sharing such a
Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024
Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful walk!
Read full commentPosted in East from Cwm-yr-Eglwys
My Dad, who grew ginormous
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
My Dad, who grew ginormous carrots, said kindly, when my carrots were very small and weird shapes growing in the heavy clay here, that carrots like sandy soil, because it is easier for them? I sympathise very much with your poem and like Paul,...
Read full commentPosted in The tentative gardener
very beautiful partner to
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024
very beautiful partner to your lovely Waterfall poem
Read full commentPosted in State Of Bliss
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