Granny to the rescue1

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My stories have been read 5647 times 3 of my 24 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes

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Ann Smith
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When we made Love

By Granny to the rescue1 on Tue, 23 Feb 2016

When we made LOVE I sliced my finger with a knife, When we made LOVE I cut off my fingernail, I helped with YOU MUM And I carried YOU out, I crafted...
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)
Poem
Certificate U

Circle of life

By Granny to the rescue1 on Mon, 25 Jan 2016

In this world, world we have, have a while, while we live, live in air, air we breathe, breathe in life, life we make, make our way, way in time,...
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Poem
Certificate U

Tribute

By Granny to the rescue1 on Tue, 19 Jan 2016

What is a tribute? A great compliment or praise Hip Hip Hip Horay
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Certificate U

Bitch

By Granny to the rescue1 on Mon, 18 Jan 2016

Peter looked around the poster strewn walls of the Old West café. It was fairly busy and far too noisy. His eyes fixed on a woman with blond hair;...
Other Fiction
Story
Certificate 15

Robin

By Granny to the rescue1 on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

Robin I rescued a little Robin Bertie I did name He couldn’t fly he couldn’t walk But I loved him just the same And when it got to Christmas Eve He...
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Certificate PG

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3 of my comments have received 3 Great Feedback votes

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Terrrrific tale.  I love the

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016

Terrrrific tale.  I love the fluency of the story and the rhyming of the speech, between the descriptive sections. I was almost expecting to hear, 'it's behind you,' somewhere in there. This would be a good piece to convert to a pantomime.

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Written with compassion , you

Posted on Wed, 27 Jan 2016

Written with compassion , you have commanded the readers attention with this Poem. It is regimented and orderly. A story in Rhyme. Without generalization you have described the private fears and sorrows of a delisted soldier, damaged physically...

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There was more than a twist

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

There was more than a twist to his tail. I like the unusual story. Well written with good pace and an unexpected ending.

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Posted in Rudy, Lil Red and DJ Gran [Red Riding Hood Retelling]