The Verdict

Cherry

By loquaciousicity

Wed, 27 Jan 2016
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                           NOW
 
Well, GI Jack is welcome back, he left his legs in 'Nam.
He wakes at night in sweat and fright, then drinks another dram.
He doesn't know quite where to go, so seeks his uncle, Sam.
 
 
                           BEFORE
 
One can't ignore - his ma was poor, and seasons sometimes cruel,
yet Jack was brave and well behaved and surely no one's fool
so joined the ranks that man the tanks, as soon as he left school
 
He learned to kill our foes at will (ordained a sacred rite)
then packed his bag, unfurled his flag, when sent away to fight.
And yes, the tide was on our side (for, clearly, might makes right)
 
Through tangled days in jungles' maze, he sought the enemy
behind the trees where, ill at ease, he fought the Yellow sea -
upon the waves of gravelled graves he sailed a killing spree
 
The napalm dropped and cooked the crops, charred huts along the way 
and tanks, with zest, erased the rest, their villages of clay.
(Yes, turret guns are loads of fun with roaring roundelay.)
 
While on the hunt with other grunts, he burned some babes alive
and wondered why frail things must die, while evil's phantoms thrive -
<When folly ends, he'll make amends if only he'll survive>
 
With booby traps (sticks smeared with crap), yes, Charlie fought unfair.
He hid in holes with snakes and voles and snuck up everywhere 
and like a mite within the night, caught Jackie unaware
 
At battle's end, Jack sought his friends - their souls were washed away
and only he and destiny were left in disarray -
with bed and pan, just half a man, the man of yesterday
 
When Jack awoke beyond the smoke, his frame no longer whole,
he found instead some suture thread neath wraps to hide the hole,
and realized a further prize: a chair on wheels to roll
 
His head felt light, as well it might, at Victory Day Parade
(across his chest, you've surely guessed, his medals shone, arrayed) 
for when he rolled, while others strolled, his boots no longer weighed
 
 
                           AFTER
 
Well, Jack stayed home (no roads to Rome) to start his life anew
receiving dole which took its toll as largess went askew
for sure enough, when times got tough, his uncle, Sam, withdrew
 
To walk the streets with fine elites (or else some bum who begs)
or find a job (or even rob) requires both your legs.
And those who can't, are viewed askant like those we call the dregs.
 
For getting by he tried to ply and mine his medals' worth -
a wooden cup, a mangy pup, a smirk when miming mirth,
and best of all, at midnight’s call, beneath a bridge, a ‘berth’
 
He clutched a sign 'A dime to dine?', if anybody cared,
but soon he found, as time unwound, that victors seldom shared.
And Jackie's pride was slowly fried by vacant eyes that stared
 
 
                           ENLIGHTENMENT
 
He took to drink to break the link with thoughts of what he'd done
and threads of doubt began to flout the yarns Big Brother spun
of freedom's ring and other things, like what it was we'd won
 
His vague unease arrayed a breeze with words that chilled the air
and like the fogs above the bogs, they floated through the square
where people sat at tea to chat, and shrieked 'How could he dare?' 
 
Yes, freedom's price is never nice: like storms before the flood
the Daily Rag was on a jag, was looking out for blood,
deemed Jackie's thoughts untamed and fraught, then dragged him through the mud
 
By hacking clues, they plucked his views like grapes upon the vine.
Big Brother came, blamed Jackie's name for thinking out of line,
shut Jack away from light of day, eclipsing freedom’s shine
 
The Junto Brass, with eyes of glass, were robed in fine array
to hear the words (though slightly slurred) the witness gasped to say,
while Justice snored (the waterboard awash with Perrier)
 
Well, Jack was charged with laws enlarged in secret dossiers
within the guise of spreading lies and leading thoughts astray -
The Jury's out... the rabble shout “well someone's gotta pay” 
 
The Judge (who fears the mind’s frontiers) inclined his head to yawn
while making haste through courtroom waste, though slightly pale and wan.
(A voodoo Loon withdraws as soon as Night condemns the Dawn.)
 
 
                           ETERNITY
 
While in his cell, the verdict fell - the sighs of Silence, rife
While in his cell, the verdict fell - the Reaper played a fife
While in his cell, the verdict fell - the price was Jackie's life
 
 
                           EPILOGUE
 
Well Jackie's ghost, unlike the most, still mused upon the praise
for misdeeds done in victories won when cruising in a craze,
and once again upon the sin of thinking, nowadays
where, cunningly, humanity’s served lies, and trust betrays.
Then, reconciled, it simply smiled at fortune's wanton ways.
 
 
                           EPITAPH
 
A mind was caught while thinking thoughts neath Sammy’s prying gaze
and forced to stop by concept cops, else join the castaways.
For now it's law to hold in awe the brave new world's malaise
and cerebrate with programmed pate, adorned with thorned bouquets,
then mimic mimes in troubled times - and no one disobeys.
With freedom’s death, truth holds its breath awaiting better days.
Certificate U
Poem
Biography

Comments

Submitted by Granny to the r... on

Written with compassion , you have commanded the readers attention with this Poem. It is regimented and orderly. A story in Rhyme. Without generalization you have described the private fears and sorrows of a delisted soldier, damaged physically and emotionally by the sights of war.  The line 'Well someone's gotta pay' profound in it's simplicity.War makes soldiers what they are, then critisises what they become. Food for thought, Well done.

 

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thanks, Granny!!

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Read this, earlier today, and to be totally honest, I was lost for words.  

You said them all for me, and I marvel at your prowess, both as  a wordsmith, and as a fellow traveller on this trip we know as 'life'.

Tina

 

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Thank you, Tina...

You are very KINDlaugh

Your praise means very much too me!!

Yes, it's a trip... an all too short trip... borne, often, with too much misery and too little compassion for others... 

Terry