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I enjoyed this defence of
Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018
I enjoyed this defence of dragons - thank you for posting it. If you're looking for suggestions, then perhaps it could do with a bit of cutting down - hope that helps
Read full commentPosted in I Could Never Kill The Dragon
Happy Solstice to you too
Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018
Happy Solstice to you too Otterman. That extra minute is something I very much look forward to!
Read full commentPosted in Solstice Observance
What the others all said -
Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018
What the others all said - but also, there is something very wonderful about hanging laundry in the garden - the precise order one has to follow, like a counting game, and then taking it back off again when dry. You have reminded me of this all...
Read full commentPosted in love and laundry
no matter how the fresh air/
Posted on Wed, 19 Dec 2018
no matter how the fresh air/ how fresh the air?
Read full commentPosted in No Good News
I really enjoyed this orginal
Posted on Sun, 16 Dec 2018
I really enjoyed this orginal and well written piece. A wonderful ending especially. Thank you Theshy!
If you do another draft, there are a few places where you've used the present tense - or kept it in by mistake (not sure if you started...
Read full commentPosted in A Light Supper
I really enojyed this little
Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018
I really enojyed this little slice of life writing but I wanted more!
Read full commentPosted in Results: 1979
I’m very sorry you’re not
Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018
I’m very sorry you’re not well Hudson and I hope you improve soon, but to be honest I’m not 100% sorry if it results in a piece of sparkling prose like this. It’s the best thing I’ve seen on ABCTales for a while. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Another Cock-Eyed Christmas
ok, I've just re-read this
Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018
ok, I've just re-read this part - I do realise this might all change if, as you say, she gets more space in the next parts, but so far she seems to me to be just a foil for gillis - someone to whom he speaks and who occasionally relays...
Read full commentPosted in Aura (22)
Fabulous title - and I really
Posted on Thu, 22 Nov 2018
Fabulous title - and I really like the poem. Do you think perhaps that first 'but' might be a bit unnecessary?
Read full commentPosted in Poem Written On A Plane Over The Atlantic Attempting To Justify A Life Of Debauchery
this is developing at just
Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018
this is developing at just the right pace - nicely balanced too, between local colour, dialogue and action. So much harder to get right than people think
Read full commentPosted in Aura (4)
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