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yes, it did become clear once
Posted on Sat, 09 Feb 2019
yes, it did become clear once I'd read on (not before I'd wondered whether it was a typo and you'd meant snacks perhaps), but it was a shame it interrupted the flow of reading. I wonder if you could change it for something else? Clicking maybe?...
Read full commentPosted in Above Clun
I think it's also a diuretic
Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019
I think it's also a diuretic so don't have Ed's drink and go on a long car journey!
Read full commentPosted in Dandelions
Brilliant! A wonderful little
Posted on Mon, 28 Jan 2019
Brilliant! A wonderful little slice of magic - you have placed everything just right - not too much of the magic and not too much of the present, and the dialogue was perfect too. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Walk In The Park With Snow (Part 2 of 2)
There's something very
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2019
There's something very satisfying about reading about characters I feel I've grown to know - I'm really enjoying this celticman. A couple of things:
'Angel has stayed in all week and the following week' - had stayed
'Angel took a...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 9 (and Pizza Face)
Is this the image you
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2019
Is this the image you replaced the original with? It's wonderful! As is the poem - says so much in so few words
Read full commentPosted in Tree Speaks
It's a horrible habit isn't
Posted on Fri, 25 Jan 2019
It's a horrible habit isn't it. I'd sign your petition TK!
Read full commentPosted in Fine.
Wonderful prose - I
Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019
Wonderful prose - I especially love the dialogue at the end between pizza face and angel - not just what it says, but for what it doesn't say. A few typos below. Keep going! :
her body has a repertoire of 5000 words - had
Your Song ...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 3 (disco)
A really interesting piece
Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019
A really interesting piece with an original approach - thank you for posting it
Read full commentPosted in Night Terrors
A well written and very
Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019
A well written and very personal reflection on this tragedy - well done TK
Read full commentPosted in Madeleine McCann.
perhaps you could let th
Posted on Wed, 16 Jan 2019
perhaps you could let the police know where it is in case the owner calls them, and also maybe put something on your local facebook page? Not a photo - say they'd have to describe it to you, or the hotel in order to get it back. I see lots of...
Read full commentPosted in The Training Day.
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