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My stories have been read 518888 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2369 of my 15,187 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2420 votes
'Just a friend. If it is was
Posted on Fri, 22 Feb 2019
'Just a friend. If it is was a boyfriend I’d be raging.'
if it was
Poor Angel. I think it's good to take the pace down a bit as you have in this part
Read full commentPosted in Angel 34 (Jonah)
Such a sad story
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
Such a sad story
Read full commentPosted in Isle of Bute.
This is our Story of the Week
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
This is our Story of the Week - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
This is absolutely wonderful!
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
This is absolutely wonderful! I wish you were more than just an occasional poster - do come back soon with another one
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Some delicious description in
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Some delicious description in this Rhiannon. Are we still missing our Elms, or did they find a disease resistant variety to replant with?
Read full commentPosted in The fruit of the elm
It's all happening in this
Posted on Sat, 16 Feb 2019
It's all happening in this part! Maybe when you do the next draft - I know you have a lot of information to get out but I'm not completely sure the dilaogue sounds as natural here as it usually does
Read full commentPosted in Angel 28 (proposal)
'I don’t here anything from
Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019
'I don’t here anything from him.' hear
the scene between Karen and Angel is really touching
Has she had a tooth knocked out?
Keep going!
Read full commentPosted in Angel 24 (Corton Vale)
‘That’s no what you’re friend
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
‘That’s no what you’re friend Kimmie says. She says you were partying and she went into the room with one of his friends and she came into the living room after hearing a whaling noise '
your friend Kimmie. a wailing noise. Also I don't...
Read full commentPosted in Angel (change and charges)
The way in which you show the
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
The way in which you show the different reactions build up a very believable picture - so sad.
You've put the correct rating on this piece, however the preview needs to be U rated as it appears on the front page of the site. Could you...
Read full commentPosted in Matthew
Perhaps you'll finish it now
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
Perhaps you'll finish it now and let us see the result? I enjoyed this, although if you're looking for suggestions I'd say it begins to meander a little once you start talking about the various experts
Read full commentPosted in PCT Beginning
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