love and laundry
By sylviec
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My first simple pleasure meditation,
Hanging out sweet smelling damp laundry
slowly, hand, to peg, to cloth.
Taking time to smooth each garment gently.
Watching the soft summer breeze
Come, take hold and dance with our clothes.
My son’s small tops and underwear,
So sweetly hanging next to mine.
Love in action, simple care, simple moments.
The light, fresh and bright of early morning.
Then we are off to school and work.
When I return, sons collected from childcare,
food placed on table and hungry bellies filled.
I turn once more to the laundry.
It is evening now, still soft dusk,
still sun-warmed sweet smelling now
from garden blossoms and tree pollen.
I take down each item and fold them
gently against my skin, then against each other,
into three piles, three loves.
The pegs gathered back into their own basket,
Organised for the coming day, to repeat.
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Lots to Enjoy
in this deceptively simple poem. I wonder if wouldn't work better without the first line? You show us all of that in the rest of the poem.
This is particularly beautiful
I turn once more to the laundry.
It is evening now, still soft dusk,
still sun-warmed sweet smelling now
from garden blossoms and tree pollen.
I take down each item and fold them
gently against my skin, then against each other,
into three piles, three loves.
Well done.
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there's a lot of love here.
there's a lot of love here.
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What the others all said -
What the others all said - but also, there is something very wonderful about hanging laundry in the garden - the precise order one has to follow, like a counting game, and then taking it back off again when dry. You have reminded me of this all so beautiully on a cold winter's morning - thank you, and welcome back!
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Lovely, a simple thing made
Lovely, a simple thing made beautiful in your poem.
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