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What a lovely idea for the IP
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019
What a lovely idea for the IP Rhiannon! I especially like this one, but the others are great too. This would make a lovely collection to read aloud to very small children. Do you know someone who could illustrate them?
Read full commentPosted in Kids' Colours 3)
Some wonderful lines in this
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019
Some wonderful lines in this joyful poem Di, (and you've just given me an idea for the new IP so thank you!)
is 'grren' a typo?
Read full commentPosted in gorse
Very pleased to hear things
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019
Very pleased to hear things ended on a high note TK - I don't think I would have done it either!
Read full commentPosted in Galaxy Part Four.
Another great little nature
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
Another great little nature poem and photo. Have you ever thought of making a small collection of these? Following on from your letter to your father, it would be a lovely legacy. Who knows what those views will look like in 100 years from now
Read full commentPosted in On Pippin’s Hill
Again, I'm so pleased you
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Again, I'm so pleased you enjoyed having a go at this challenge (see my comment on Rhiannon's piece) - I hope you do have another attempt. On a personal note - I remember you saying how your boss died very suddenly, which is sad etc but the fall...
Read full commentPosted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)
Oh no - poor Lisa! You've
Posted on Sun, 10 Mar 2019
Oh no - poor Lisa! You've described all the reactions in a very believable way. Glad to see another part - I was getting worried you might be stuck
A few typos:
'they had burgers and chips for lunch, proper burgers with mince, with...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 41 (Lisa's)
Whiplash is horrible- I don't
Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019
Whiplash is horrible- I don't know when you had your accident, but I hope you're recovered now
Read full commentPosted in Galaxy Part Two.
very brave of you to drive
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019
very brave of you to drive yourself home. I hope you're ok - what a shock it must have been. If that's the man's real name it might be wiser to change it a bit. Hope he doesn't try to rip you off in any way!
Read full commentPosted in Galaxy.
I can't remember whether she
Posted on Tue, 26 Feb 2019
I can't remember whether she told Pizza face she was pregnant? Anyway, he is lovely and I think she should marry him
A couple of things:
'Bruno, true to his word, had visited at every opportunity and dragged Tony along. He wanted...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 39 (returns)
Do you mean those little bits
Posted on Sun, 24 Feb 2019
Do you mean those little bits of plastic which have a thing at each end? I had no idea they were called barbs - but I know just what you mean - they are really annoying aren't they!
Read full commentPosted in Pet Hate.
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