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Hello Ode - i enjoyed this
Posted on Mon, 12 Jan 2015
Hello Ode - i enjoyed this little snippet of writing, and would certainly be happy to read more if you post it. If it's any help to you, I think you could possibly work harder on the dialogue. i realise parts of it are supposed to be the child...
Read full commentPosted in Pax Romana, City of Angels
That has got to be one of the
Posted on Mon, 29 Dec 2014
That has got to be one of the best opening exchanges I've read for ages. Loved this piece celticman. Small typo below
I’d have told him his breath smelled like Peppy-le-peu and pulverised her head against the...
Read full commentPosted in Love Cats
Happy Christmas to you too
Posted on Wed, 24 Dec 2014
Happy Christmas to you too Sean. I enjoyed this well-ordered piece - you seem to have changed tense halfway through the fourth paragraph - it might read a little better if you fixed that
Read full commentPosted in The Meaning of Christmas
hahaha - brilliant! You've
Posted on Sat, 06 Dec 2014
hahaha - brilliant! You've taken ALL the songs now though Tina! What's everyone else going to use?
Read full commentPosted in Can't Stop the Music
beautiful Sam. Reminds me of
Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014
beautiful Sam. Reminds me of a poem about Addlestrop (no idea how it was spelt)
Read full commentPosted in Train stop
quite spectacularly good -
Posted on Wed, 29 Oct 2014
quite spectacularly good - even by your standards!
Read full commentPosted in She had not aged well
missed this Bee. Glad i found
Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014
missed this Bee. Glad i found it now though - there's a kind of poetic rhythm to this prose - the ebb and flow of all the pasts. Wonderful
Read full commentPosted in All the Ghosts of Us
I found this very readable -
Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014
I found this very readable - liked the gentle humour, the main character. Although it kept my attention to the end, it could really do with being a bit less ponderous, and - i don't know if this is to be continued - would definitely enjoy...
Read full commentPosted in Early Life Crisis
A very enjoyable read - I
Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014
A very enjoyable read - I look forward to more of this. Welcome to ABC!
Read full commentPosted in The Diary of an Aspiring Hitman - Chapter 1
Splendidly surreal! (either
Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014
Splendidly surreal! (either that or you've taken a LOT of drugs recently)
Read full commentPosted in Dabavan III
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