Preparation Time
By Rhiannonw
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Before we celebrate
let’s pause and wait
to contemplate
and meditate
what we intend to celebrate.
Don’t be precipitate
take time to prepare
gifts and praise –
(not pressurised in gifting),
nor attempts at lifting
mood by frittering the days
in merriment trivial
thoughtlessly convival
fake as glitter
faded, jaded
wilting to bitter:
too much
too soon
is no celebration
just exhaustion!
[IP: too soon]
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Good advice there.
Good advice there.
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It should definitely not be
It should definitely not be all about presents, like a kind of arms race! And you are so right about planning, took me years to get that :0)
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Di's nailed it - it's just
Di's nailed it - it's just like an arms race! Wise words Rhiannon
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
A very clever poem, with your rhyme scheme working so well. And of course, a very iimportant message.
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Very thoughtful, Rhiannon. It
Very thoughtful, Rhiannon. It is so easy to get caught up in the frantic rush.
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"... In merriment trivial
"... In merriment trivial thoughtlessly convival.."
A time for celebration without forgetting the underlying message and importance of this time of year. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul
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