monodemo
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I have 442 stories published in
17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 233734 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The Abduction, Part Two
George sped the car around and hurried to see if he could find the other end of the hole in the wall. ‘You stupid idiot,’ Lenny screamed at George. ‘...
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The Abduction, Part One
‘You wan’ one?’ mumbled George, as he masticated a large piece of pepperoni pizza around his open, black hole of a mouth. Grease dripped down his...
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Ever the Optimist
Are you just another person alone Falling into the abyss? Do you believe you can be saved By true loves first kiss? Will one clumsy word or...
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Heartbeat
In 2007, I was diagnosed with a blood condition called lupus anti-coagulant. It means that my blood clots quicker than normal. I was devastated when...
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Shame
I had a three o clock appointment with Mr. Hamill, an orthopaedic surgeon. I went into the receptionist at ten to three, ten minutes early. I always...
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