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my hope my joy!

By Nolan on Sun, 22 Apr 2018

my hope my pride my joy! slumber my darling son! may you be pure of heart honest and truthful faithful and gentle grow up strong of deed full of...

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fields of wonder

By Nolan on Fri, 20 Apr 2018

life's sweetest dream he sings night through calls turtle dove small girlchild how cherished rest be still hush sweetness! soft are your eyes free of...

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bless the wild child

By Nolan on Thu, 19 Apr 2018

may his hand protect you may you be strong of faith brave patient true and pure a fountain of eternal hope may you be gentle and caring find favour...

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my only love

By Nolan on Mon, 19 Mar 2018

you're my true love my only love you're my first love you're my last pure and white bride by my side moonlight lilies and crimson roses my bread my...

Romance

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hectic

Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022

Good Work Rhiannon! Had a bit hectic weekend I'll read it properly still, it's a lot longer than most of your poem/hymns. Yes "Promised from the beginning" is very appropriate.

Have a wonderful week! Nolan

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Indeed, "worst folly

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

Indeed, "worst folly is this presuming there’s no-one far greater than we", even with all the human rights stuff- who gave us all these supposed rights?

Especially the first stanza is brilliant but both are. Lovely lyrics lovely poetry and...

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insects

Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2022

I've thought seriously that insects are from outer space to colonise earth, well really just to look at them. Really look. They are definitely alien!! The thing obviously is that they are so tiny we don't really see a threat but that exactly is...

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the fountain overflows

Posted on Mon, 14 Feb 2022

The cistern contains, the fountain overflows -William Blake

It's more of a question of slowing down! In the end everything is about love, and music, and beauty- and escaping from your situation and surroundings then at times. The friends I...

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excellent scifi

Posted on Fri, 11 Feb 2022

Really enjoying these stories, excellent scifi you give the imagination free reigns. Very original and creating a whole world, similar to Tolkien with Middle-Earth or Asimov's Robot scifi books. This story is very good it is clever. Obviously...

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great rhyme

Posted on Sun, 13 Feb 2022

In a nutshell !!

Very good Rhiannon, great rhyme-- regular, easy but whithout compulsion or doggerel, attractive and not forced in any way. I have never managed to get it quite right.

Enjoy your week, don't step on snowdrops! &...

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Zephyr

Posted on Sat, 08 Jan 2022

"Zephyr" is a beautiful word I wonder what the origin is it is not used often. Could be Greek? I know it from the Ford Zephyr a kind of sports car actually a 6 cylinder I think. First we had an Anglia father of the Ford Escorts, yes I was a baby...

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criminal mind

Posted on Fri, 21 Jan 2022

This is good prose Rob, just slightly incoherent maybe also your punctuation is a bit casual. Myself could never understand a criminal mind I knew someone who majored in criminology and psychology that's about it. Sounds very boring. Some guys...